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Last Moment With Dashie by BlackGryph0n

Say whatever you want about My little pony"It's girly,it's for kids,brony this,brony that"I have to say fuck those people cause if a sh...


Where do I start? This story is...stupid,laughably bad,and most of all disappointing in my opinion because...wow,okay so Jane was creat...

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I know that a lot of people have different tastes in things like TV shows,movies,games and even clothes...but what really confuses me is what I've seen on this site...people that love the nazi uniform...I just...what!? I don't get it,I've seen people say it's the power that attracts them but why would anyone love the power that was used to kill millions of Jews and people hitter didn't find "worthy" of living in "his new world order"? Doesn't the uniform represent what you stand for? If you wear the uniform doesn't that mean you agree with what they did? And yet people say"They don't"but why love the uniform? Really those things should be destroyed,I mean people who saw that uniform knew that they were either going to be shot on site or sent to the consecration camps to suffer many atrocities,experiments,being burned alive,beaten,and even being starved to death to the point of being a skeleton...I just don't get it,why love something that represents the idealogy that that Jews are treated inferior and are killed without a second thought what's next? The Kkk uniforms are being loved but the people who love them aren't racist? I'm just saying that this sends a lot of signals that aren't good...I don't know this has been bothering me for a while when I've seen the stamps about"loving the nazi uniform but I'm not a nazi"Now for a question I want answered:If you saw someone walking around in a nazi uniform,how would you feel? What would you think about that person? And if you know someone who loves the uniform but says they don't support nazis what would you think? I really want to know why people like it
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The girl looked around the car and saw nothing,the young man lead her to the trunk and opened it...showing a man with a white face,long black hair,big eyes with no eyelids,and a gag that covers his cut open mouth

"MMMM! MMMMMM!"Jeffery struggles with the chains that are tied on his wrists and feet 

"JEFFYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!"The girl squealed so loud that Shawn had to cover his ears but the squeal shattered all windows,cars blew up,innocent bystanders died from their brains exploding

Shawn took a chance and covered the girl's mouth with his hand

"Don't.do that"Shawn trembled as he tried to stand but the annoying sound was still buzzing in his ears"Now I'm gonna let you go Ugh but when I do...you're not going to yell,you're not going to scream or whatever the fuck that was,G-GOT IT!?"Shawn yelled losing a bit of his vision 

The girl nodded

"Good!"He lets her go 

"I'm so happy! OMG! The real Jeff the killer!"The girl yelled in excitement as she gets a closer look at Jeff who had a terrified expression on his face as he tried to get out of his bindings to no avail 

"THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!"The hyperactive annoyance yelled shaking both of the Young man's hands with such force that he felt like his arms were going to be ripped off

"Guh!"Shawn's vision was getting worse and felt blood trickle out of his ears

The girl let him go and gave him an envelope of cash

"On be half of J.T.K.I.S.S.H.I.T. WE THANK YOU FOR YOUR SERVICE!!!!"The pain in the ass bowed then closed the trunk and then drove away hopefully never to be seen again

Shawn used the wall to keep him from not falling down

"Fucking hell Ngh"Shawn shook his head to get that annoying sound out of his head"Ugh! I almost feel sorry for that bastard"He grimaced as he slowly opened the envelope to see it full of cash"Damn...How did she get all this money?...and what the hell is the J.T.K.I.S.S.H.I.T?"Shawn wondered but shrugged as he made his way to the nearest hospital to get any damage that loud mouth idiot did fixed

Unknown area

"THE JEFF THE KILLER IS SO SUPER HOT I TOUCH MYSELF CLUB WILL COME TO ORDER! MY SISTERS! OUR PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED! OUR GOD HAS BEEN FOUND!!!!"The girl screamed making the ground under her shake

Females also wearing hoodies that concealed their identities raised their knives up high and squealed loud enough to end the world but they thankfully stopped as their leader raised her hand

"Now then my sisters! Feast your eyes ON THE RETURN OF OUR GOD!"The leader pulls a lever that opens the curtain behind her revealing Jeff the killer strapped by his arms and legs to a bed with sheets and pillows covered in pictures of his face

Jeff still tries to break out of his bindings but almost falls unconscious when he hears what sounds like a thousand goats screaming

"OMG IT'S HIM!"
"HE'S SO CUTE!"
"KAWAIIIIIII!"
"JEFFYPOO!"
"SO HOOOOOOOOOOT!"

The hooded women surrounded Jeff and yelled as loud as they could while touching him all over his body,pulling his hair and even licking his shoes

"GET OFF ME DAMMIT!! LET ME GO! WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU!?"Jeff glared as menacingly as he could but all these women could do is scream louder 

"HE THREATENED US!!"
"HE'S SO HOT WHEN HE'S MAD!"
"WILL HE PUNISH US!?"
"PUNISH ME JEFF-SAMA!"

"NOW MY SISTERS! IT IS TIME TO WELCOME OUR GOD WITH THE RESPECT HE DESERVES!"The leader yelled as she and the other hooded women took their hoods off revealing faces as white as snow,bloody smiles cut from ear to ear,and big eyes all looking at their victim with love and worship,Jeff's eyes widened as he saw his capturers true faces"We have made ourselves beautiful for you Jeff! NOW WE WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER!!!!! SISTERS!!!"The leader shouted as all of them slowly walked to Jeff with smiles getting bigger and their laughs getting more terrifying 

"NO! NO!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!"Jeff screamed as he was swarmed by these psychotic women,all that can be heard are laughs and Squeals

Epilogue

No one knows what happened to Jeff the killer. People have complained about the noise coming from a warehouse in the docks,the police were called and when they arrived at the scene they found no one there. However they did find something,photographs of unknown women posing next to who they suspect was Jeff the killer but how could that be? Could it be the stories are real? Or was this some kind of prank? The police also found what seems to be short stories though they they all are badly written but from what the police could understand they were all stories about Jeff the killer paired with a girl. Most of them had explicit content even with fellow legends such as Slenderman,BEN DROWNED,and laughing Jack...so what happened to Jeff the killer? Some say he's being hugged to death by his fans,others say he's being forced to read these horrible stories about him until he gouged out his eyes to be released from his cruel fate...nobody knows.

AN:Huh...that was fucked up...tell me what you think and be honest!
Shawn awoke from his slumber when the cool wind touched his face,he looks
around seeing many tombstones as far as the eye can see.

"Hrm...That's right,I fell asleep"Shawn yawned as he stretched his arms up cracking his bones"Haa~Hrm?"Shawn tried to stand up but felt something on his lap,it wasn't heavy but he could feel it breathing and it had a lot of curly brown hair.

Shawn put a hand on the forest of hair and smiled a bit

'For a ghost She's starting to get heavy,hehe'The young man thought laughing a bit

"Mmm..."The curls bounced up as it seems another has been woken from their sleep"Mmm...Hrm?"A pale face raised it's head and looked around until it came face to face with Shawn"...Good morning~"Said the face belonging to Sally williams

Shawn smiles a bit

"It's afternoon"Shawn said

"Oh...Good afternoon hehehe~"Sally said giggling while smiling childishly

"Hrmmm"Shawn pulls her cheek

"Owie! Thath hurths"Sally try's to say

Shawn laughs a bit and squeezes her other cheek trying to see how far her baby fat will go

"Show mean"Sally says pouting

Shawn lets her go and pets her head

"Sorry squirt,I'm just teasing"Shawn smiles feeling the curls under his fingers'Someone could get lost in all that hair...I wonder if I could give her a haircut?'Shawn ponders as Sally looks up at him still pouting

"Hrmmmm,TAKE THIS!*Sally yells as she grabs Shawn's cheeks and pulls them as hard as her tiny fingers can

"Ow,Hat hurtst!"Shawn said faking the pain

"Ehehehe~you sound weird~!"Sally giggles 

"Hrmmm~Why you!"Shawn then pulls Sally's cheeks once more

"Ow! Tath this!"Sally pulls harder 

"Tahth HAT!"Pulls a bit more

The two keep pulling until they look at each other

"...Pff,HAHAHAHAHAHA!"The two laughed as they looked at the others face and how silly they looked

All this happiness was called to a halt when Shawn's phone rang

"Gah!"Shawn's eyes darkened as he reluctantly pulled his phone out and answered it"Hello?...Uh-Huh...Where?...captured or dead?..."Shawn's expression became cold as Sally watched in disappointment,realizing that all this fun was going to end,she loved these happy times they spent together but all of it stops when his phone rings,Sally would see people talk on their phones and most of them smile or laugh,she's seen some angry but when she sees Shawn's expression it's like he's a different person and not the kind person who would come visit her and play with her everyday

"Okay,got it...yeah,I'll call you when it's done"Shawn hangs up his phone and puts it in his pocket and looked at Sally"Sorry Sally,I have to go"He says petting her head again

Sally leans her head against Shawn's chest with her hair covering her eyes

"...You'll come back right?Sally mumbles while holding on to him

Shawn hated to leave her but he had to,he made a promise he intends to keep so that these carefree times can last forever

Shawn puts a hand under Sally's chin and makes her look him in the eye,he can see the tears almost coming out of her eyes and he kissed her on the forehead then gives her a hug 

"I promise,I'll be right back after work...okay?"Shawn looks down at Sally as she nods her head then pulls away from him and flashes him a big smile

"You better!"Sally says giggling

Shawn smiles also then stands up and sits her down on the grass

"Yeah,I'll be right back"Shawn says assuringly 

Sally pulls at his pant leg and Shawn kneels down to see what she wants,Sally gave him a bear hug and kissed his cheek

"GO GET EM!"Sally cheered as she pulls away

Shawn smiles and stands up giving her a thumbs up as he leaves,Sally waves as he starts to leave the cemetery,hoping for time to go fast so he will be back sooner

As Shawn walked to his car he had an annoyed expression on his face,he then went over what his client told him in his head,how his target was seen near an abandoned mansion in the forest a couple of miles away,Shawn opened the glove compartment revealing a pistol and he checked if it was still loaded,it was,Shawn has heard of his target,he was well known by all with his sick way of killing people and demented smile on his face but this was another job that had to be done

Shawn starts his car and drives to his destination ready for the challenge that lies ahead


AN:Thank you for reading,this is a tie in to my other story"It's never easy"I just felt like writing what happened before Shawn went to the mansion,more stories hopefully coming soon

Sally Williams is based on the creepypasta:Play with me by kiki Hyuga and Kiki hyuga owns Sally(abut that doesn't mean I can't hug her!*Hugs Sally*)
Shawn Thompson is owned by me
I just have one question...Why? Why is every human in the creepypasta fandom an asshole while the actual monsters are "The good guys" I'm just saying,just one likable human is that too much? I've read a lot of Fanfics about OC's becoming creepypasta monsters some are actually good,some are bad,and most are fucking Horrible and I don't mean horrible like grammer and spelling no,I mean the actual story and before you go"Don't like don't read"Go fuck yourself cause I have a right to say whatever I want and you can't take that right from me so go in a corner and write how jeff the killer is your Waifu...My problem is how writers write stories that deal with serious topics just to use for shock,to make us feel sorry for the character...it's fucking disgusting which is why I call this bullshit"The Woobie syndrome"Where a writer just hammers in forced sympathy and people say"What a great story!"Oh poor baby~"This is the best story EVAH!"I've seen comments on stories that are fucking disgusting and praise it to the heavens instead of calling them out on it,Jeff the killer for example!(Hrm,I'm picking on Jeff a lot aren't I?)I wouldn't say that story is as disgusting as most I've read but it's the fandom and mostly fangirls that make stories like this popular when it's just a shit story but I digress anyway like I said in my other journal post Jeff the killer is popular because of one reason and one reason only because he was bullied(Well mugged actually)And fangirls give him excuses"He was bullied so I understand why he killed his entire family"Oh poor Jeffy"Don't worry jeff you're beautiful!"Yeah,you know I had sympathy for him,I'll admit,when Liu(Jeff's brother)Took the blame when he(Jeff)Was willing to take the blame(Even though it was self-defense!)For"Attacking"The three assholes(Troy,Keith,and randy)And in the end after some bullshit fighting and giving science a nice 
fuck you(Spoiler alert!)Jeff gets burned and becomes the killer we know today,remember what I said about sympathy and me? My sympathy was high when Jeff was mature and turned himself in(Again! SELF! DEFENSE! SAY IT WITH ME EVERYONE!)But then my sympathy took a nose dive straight into the ground when HE KILLED HIS ENTIRE FAMILY! Now I know what people are going to say"He was insane! He didn't know what he was doing!"If he was well enough to cut a smile into his face,burn his eyelids,kill his parents,and then sneak into his brothers room and kill him then he knows what he was doing! But so many people keep defending him...making him look like the victim when he killed.his.entire.family and what's funny to me is,there are people who feel the same way I do,they even call out what a shit story it is but who is there to defend this? Fangirls! Why? Woobie syndrome...and all the Yaoi fan-art and reader-insert stories and fanfiction...now don't get me wrong I actually like the original story of Jeff the killer,to me it's so bad it's good,with all the WWE fighting,laughable dialogue,and just plain horrible writing and this is suppose to be taken seriously?...Uh no and really the only reason people even know about Jeff is because of the picture which isn't scary at all...well it could be scary with a jump scare! Which is a very lazy thing to do instead of building up atmosphere but no Jumpscares are made more popular and probably make anything that uses it popular when it's just shit...like five nights at Freddie's*Hears the booing of many fans*Oh shut up you're just sitting down waiting for a jumpscare it's not scary it's lazy! But to get on the main topic,I have read stories on this site and many others write stories in serious topics and use it in the most disrespectful way possible,using it for shock and for us to to feel sorry for the character instead of writing it like a fucking adult but don't get me wrong there are people who do treat serious topics like an adult but so far I've read more horrible ones,I remember a story I read that involves suicide,so,etching that should be treated with respect but instead I see a gary-stu who convinces a girl not to jump to her death...by being her boyfriend...and they.just.met...I fucking hated this story...why? Because it treats a serious topic like suicide... as something used for a guy to get a girlfriend...Fuck.you,now I know we all want to be loved and yes people have killed themselves and/or attempted to kill themselves because the person they love didn't love them back,gone through a brake up,or feel like they're alone in this world,that nobody will love them but just like the song "I love myself" by Kendrick Lamar said"You can't love anyone if you can't love yourself"I'm no expert but I know if you put someone on such a high pedestal they're going to think they have power over you but that's a rant for some other time back to the story,from what I've noticed some if not most writers in this site or any other site use these serious topics as a plot device,to forward the plot instead of treating it with respect and writing it,like a goddamn adult! Another story was about Rape...oh I can just hear everyone's asshole squeeze tight at the mention of the word but yes,another serious topic and again some people can write it like an adult and have a reason for it to be there instead of it being used for shock! And that's another problem I read in stories,let me ask a question,is your story so boring that you have to add a serious topic and just put it there for no reason that you might as well never have mentioned it at all!? I've seen this happen to characters in stories for one reason! Say it with me! TO FORCE SYMPATHY ON A CHARACTER! It's so manipulative it's fucking disgusting! And yet...people.like it...I see the comments and how much it's praised um excuse me,did we read the same story? I know people can interpret things in different ways but when the story is just flat out telling you to"PITY ME! PITY THIS CHARACTER! PITY ME!"Or"Oh this is so deep even though there's no reason for this to even be in the story"...Fuck.stories.that are like this and fuck the authors who use topics like this as a joke! Instead of taking it seriously!...Am I wrong? Am I just over thinking this? Am I the only one who cares? It seems so since all the disgusting,manipulative,forced,pieces of shit stories get so much praise and no one calls them out on it...But...I'm glad,I'm glad that there are good stories out there in this site and other sites that have nothing forced or use a serious topic as a joke or just plain write what they know and not write some offensive shit! If you're going to use a serious topic in your story,treat it with respect! Write it like an adult! Actually give a damn about how topics like this effect REAL people! If you can't do this then DON'T WRITE IT! Cause if you do you'll look like an insensitive asshole! But they're going to get good feedback anyway so I'm just yelling at a wall,tell me,am I wrong? Should I just not care anymore? Should I just be silent when something is offensive is offensive? Should I point out forced sympathy? Tell me! Cause I don't know anymore! UGH! I'm done! If you got this far thank you for sticking around here's some cookies! 🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪 tell me what you think,I will appreciate any feedback! GAH WHERE'S MY PEPSI!?
I just read this-reason.com/blog/2015/02/19/mal… and you know this fucking horrible,an innocent male student was banned from from his college,kicked out of his housing,lost his job on campus and any cutting him off from his housing, and educational opportunity taken away from him,why? Because he just happened to look like someone who raped this girl(Who's a fellow student in the college) even though there was an investigation and he was innocent but he's still banned...you know,I'm afraid that this will get out of hand,that women will accuse someone who reminds them of someone who,raped them,beat them,or just plain doesn't like that that person and the person accused even when they are innocent they will lose any opportunity to get an education...He's innocent! They looked through his relationships and talked to his friends(Which is an invasion of privacy) if they know anything about him being a rapist but in the end he was found innocent but still banned because if he stayed there it would"Trigger"those memories of her being raped...He.was.Found.innocent! He's not a rapist! They should apologize to that student and especially that girl who put him through this bullshit! But no,because he looked like someone's rapist he was kicked out of his college,I have a question,what if the genders were reversed? What if a guy was raped by a girl and he sees someone who happened to look like her and reported her? Would they go through her privacy to see if she raped any men? Or if she raped any women? Would they ban her from a college and take her education,her campus job,and just ban her from the college entirely even though she was found innocent? Cause if a guy looks at her he'll have "Triggers" to remember what happened to him? Tell me what you think in the comments but me? I'd say it wouldn't happen cause then feminists would bitch and moan saying"Oh he and the school hate women!"FUCK.THIS.SHIT!
I know that a lot of people have different tastes in things like TV shows,movies,games and even clothes...but what really confuses me is what I've seen on this site...people that love the nazi uniform...I just...what!? I don't get it,I've seen people say it's the power that attracts them but why would anyone love the power that was used to kill millions of Jews and people hitter didn't find "worthy" of living in "his new world order"? Doesn't the uniform represent what you stand for? If you wear the uniform doesn't that mean you agree with what they did? And yet people say"They don't"but why love the uniform? Really those things should be destroyed,I mean people who saw that uniform knew that they were either going to be shot on site or sent to the consecration camps to suffer many atrocities,experiments,being burned alive,beaten,and even being starved to death to the point of being a skeleton...I just don't get it,why love something that represents the idealogy that that Jews are treated inferior and are killed without a second thought what's next? The Kkk uniforms are being loved but the people who love them aren't racist? I'm just saying that this sends a lot of signals that aren't good...I don't know this has been bothering me for a while when I've seen the stamps about"loving the nazi uniform but I'm not a nazi"Now for a question I want answered:If you saw someone walking around in a nazi uniform,how would you feel? What would you think about that person? And if you know someone who loves the uniform but says they don't support nazis what would you think? I really want to know why people like it

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