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Where do I start? This story is...stupid,laughably bad,and most of all disappointing in my opinion because...wow,okay so Jane was creat...

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Where do I start? This story is...stupid,laughably bad,and most of all disappointing in my opinion because...wow,okay so Jane was created through science,I can understand that but...she was made into an unstoppable killer so she can kill Jeff and the people doing this to her are the U.s government,the police,F.B.I,and C.I.A who did this experiment that not only was funded by our government at the cost of 6.9 million dollars(Which lets be honest is stupid because instead of using that money to help people they use it on making the perfect killer)But one that killed many people...so the government has killed people to make this experiment work but now has Jane on the loose(who is now over-powered )so she can kill Jeff...I'd like to remind everyone that Jeff.is.HUMAN! In the story he is human not some super villain who can kill you just by looking at you,he is as human as you and me(Considering the fact that he's still alive from cutting a smile to his mouth and burning his eyelids off and that's just Bullshit writing)And you're telling me that the police and all their men and women on the force couldn't stop this one guy that they need to involve scientist and the government,Jeff is human no what anybody says and he isn't some calculating killer that is five steps ahead of you he is an insane lunatic that gets off from killing,he was burned alive and snapped by killing his entire family because he lost his mind...back to Jane,Jane the killer was introduced to me through the Creepypasta Jeff vs Jane(Which I believe is a good story)And I wanted to know more about her because someone is actually trying to kill Jeff instead of trying to fuck him(Looking at you fan girls)And I liked her character because she was on a mission for revenge to kill the asshole who killed her parents and I love revenge stories and I liked the fact that she wanted Jeff dead by any means necessary and when I heard that she had a kid with Jeff I wanted to know what was going to happen next but sadly I haven't heard anything...then I read the "real"story which was a piece of garbage that almost ruined the character...and that's it I thought that I would hear no more Jane the killer stories...then read this and I Not going to lie I laughed my ass off when I read this and I'm sorry but I couldn't take any of these characters seriously,I mean Jane was given a life,she had a job she had to pay rent which made her feel human and relatable because after her parents were killed she still tried to look after her sister and try to have a normal life,Which by the way thinking about Jane the killer in an IHOP is hilarious but still good because she's supporting herself and her sister through hard times,this is what I want to read about,Jane having a normal life despite everything that's happened and she's not depressed or crying every few seconds she stands on her own two feet and does what she has to do to take care of her only family,that's the story I want to read because that.is.AWESOME! this story had me when I read that and...I wanted to know more...however things start to get stupid...okay so,Jane is forced to go through an experiment that almost killed her which by the way is funded by the government to kill one guy who's insane not Joker insane but IN.SANE,he doesn't plan things he's a killer Thats it and the police couldn't find or arrest him(again he's human,just some guy with a knife against cops with GUNS and they couldn't use THEM!? "Never bring a knife to a gun fight" must mean shit if you're fighting Jeff the killer...and the Government wastes millions to make the perfect killer...and we all know that always works out! Wolverine he...killed all the scientist...which is the same thing Jane did...Huh...well there is captain America who was made to fight hydra with the help of the super solider syrum which made him a super hero and stronger than normal humans and Jane had the liquid hate that...made her stronger than normal humans...Huh...anyway this story made Jane into...a comic book character or anime or any other types of fiction,I will give credit to the "real" story because despite all the mary-sue bullshit she was still human which made her relatable,she wants revenge on Jeff because he killed her family and friends,I'm not saying this always happens I'm saying that we can understand why she's doing what she's doing however this story made Jane WAAAAAAAY too Over powered that if there's a sequel to to this story it will end the second Jane finds Jeff all she has to do is grab him and kill him because if bullets don't phase her what are the chances of a killer with a knife stopping her? None! Jane can now easily kill Jeff in two seconds,Jane has a healing factor and is super strong and Jeff?...He has a knife that's it! Jane wins! End of story! This made Jeff vs Jane pointless because she will win with all that power and I thought Slenderman vs Jeff was ridiculous...it is and this story made a fight that jeff can't possibly win,Slenderman can kill you just by looking at you and now Jane is super powered...these fights aren't equal,you want an equal fight? Freedy vs Jason is an equal fight an immortal zombie vs an immortal Demon that is equal not this...I'm sorry for rambling but I needed to make a point...this story has destroyed any suspense that a fight between Jeff and this Jane the killer would have,the one in Mr.creepypasta is equal and you don't know who will win until it's over and it's a great story maybe MBK will make a Jeff vs Jane also and I can bet anything that it will be a great story also but this? I'm sorry but no...no,this story can't have a jeff vs Jane because it'll be over fast unless some bullshit happens that make Jeff the ultimate badass...Mr.angrydog I'm sorry and I'm sure you worked hard but this is not the Jane the killer story I wanted to read if maybe you stretched out what happened to Jane after her parents were killed and her struggles to live her life after everything that's happened and in the end decided to stand up and kill that son of a bitch without the whole over powered stuff this would have been an awesome story...but this is my opinion
Working on new story please look forward to it,until then please check out my other Stories and give me an honest review,thank you
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The bruises on their skin will heal but the scars in their heart won't  

A teacher in New York was teaching her class about bullying and gave them the following exercise to perform. She had the children take out a piece of paper and told them to crumple it up, stomp on it and really mess it up, not to rip it. Then she had them unfold the paper, smooth it out and look at how scarred and dirty it was. She then told them to tell it they're sorry. Now, even though they said they were sorry and tried to fix the paper, she pointed out all the scars they left behind. And that those scars will never go away no matter how hard they tried to fix it. That is what happens when a child bullies another child, they may say they're sorry, but the scars are there forever. The looks on the faces of the children in the classroom told her the message hit home. Copy and paste this if you are against bullying.Let's see who will actually re-post this. This is a test to see who's paying attention. This is a test to see how many people list actually pay attention. Copy and re-post in your own journal. Let's see who the real people are. Re-post this if you care about this kind of situation. Don't reply... just copy and paste this in a new bulletin as "Fake Deviants"repost from:
All our lives
We're filled with so much information
ABC's
Multiplication tables
read,write,read,write/question/question/question

As a kid we'd celebrate that day
that supposedly amazing day.
to praise him for his "accomplishments"
is nothing but an insult to those who lost their lives
question/question

We thank him for all he's done as if praising a monster
we were given the fairytale version when we were kids
question/question
we were given the "happy ending" we all want
but years later we learn the truth/question/question

He raped and killed innocent people to get what he wanted
question/question/who is this monster?
his name is like poison every time I speak its name
and when I write his name on a piece of paper or type his name for a report
I erase or delete his name as if doing so will make him disappear/erased from existence

question/question/who is this monster?
This monster isn't under your bed or in the closet waiting to eat you
This monster is well known but not as we were taught
question/question/
His name is known under a word that spits in the face of people who earned it...Hero
who is this monster?/question/question
His name...his name is...










Christopher Columbus
"This is it"The young man said parking his car in front of an abandoned mansion in the woods,it was dark outside and quiet,The young man pulls out a picture from the passenger seat and looks at it

"A face only a mother would love"The young man put the picture in his pocket and pulled a pistol out and checked his ammo 

"I have a feeling this isn't going to be easy...then again what is?"The young man put the ammo clip back in the gun and gets out of his car then closed the door

"Time to get to work"He pulls out his gun ready to fire and kicked open the door only to find...nothing

"Hrmmm"The young man walked into the house still with his gun drawn and pulled a flashlight then turned it on

The young man looked around the house,it looked worse than the outside,the smell of piss and shit reached his nose,all you could find was graffiti,broken floorboards,cobwebs,puddles of piss,and shit

"A piece of shit hiding in a shithole...this should be easy"The young man mumbled still searching the house

The young man went to what used to be a kitchen,not exactly as worse as the entrance but the smell was worse here

"Jesus"The young man said shinning his flashlight all over the kitchen then stopped at the sink,the young man walked to the sink to see bugs and dirt

"Any of you guys seen a psychotic killer? He's an ugly fuck with a knife...no? Well thanks anyway"The young man searches the kitchen more then stops in front of a door 

"Let's see what's behind door number one,Bob"He opens the door and felt something touch his foot and he flinched away pointing his gun at it then shinned his flashlight only to see a hand with cuts all over it

"Hrmm"The young man looks behind him to make sure he isn't being watched before slowly walking towards the hand and kicks it then points his gun at it...it didn't move

The young man sighs and slowly opens the door still keeping his eye on the hand,when the door was open the young man shines his light only to see dead bodies maybe fifteen or twenty,some were missing limps,eyes,heads,and some even look like they've been ripped open from their chests and stomachs,all of them look like they've been in here for weeks maybe months or years but one thing was for sure,the young man's target wasn't going to be easy

"This is going to be fun*The young man said going back to the entrance and searching what used to be a living room

"Let's see"The young man looks around making sure not to miss anything

*Creeeeeeeeeeak*

The young man turned around pointing his gun in the direction of the noise...nothing

"..."He points his gun and light around him not taking any chances

*Creak*Creak*Creak*

The young man looks up and sees the ceiling move a bit

"About time"The young man silently moved towards the stairs and carefully went up the stairs'The young man reached the second floor and it was even worse than downstairs,dead rats littered the floor with the smell of rot and shit was stronger

The young man took a deep breath and walked up the hallway looking in through rooms only to find them empty 

"Hrm?"The young man sees something on the floor and picks it up,it was...ugly,it was a small toy of a boy in all green with a smile that could make anyone cringe and it's eyes weren't any better either,it looked like it was happy or...just insane,this looked like it was bought from a toy shop from hell

"Heh,These sick fucks and their toys"He puts the "Toy"down then leaves the room,the young man was about to sigh...when he felt something sharp in the side of his neck

"Hehehehe"A laugh can be heard right next to him, the young man looked at the figure in the darkness,he couldn't see who it was but he could see it's eyes,big and unblinking,they say the eyes are the window to the soul and in this person's eyes was...Madness

The young man shined his flashlight at the things face...my god did he regret it,The young man saw what looked like it came from a horror movie,A white face with big unblinking eyes...no sign of any eyelids,no nose,red lips,and a smile...his smile wasn't that of a happy person,no,it was a smile that will haunt anyone who sees it,the things lips looked like it was cut open showing his gums and teeth with a long slash in the corners of it's mouth reaching to it's ears,a smile from ear to ear is an understatement compared to this

"Jeffery Woods?"The young man said calmly

"Hehehehehe,I-I don't go by that name anymore,Hehehehehe...Now...Go.to-"

*BANG BANG BANG BANG!*

The man known as Jeffery staggers back and falls on the floor with bullet holes on his chest

"Sleep"The young man said rubbing some blood off his neck and walks to Jeffery's dead body

"Little piece of advice...never bring knife to a gun fight*The young man shined his flashlight and pointed his gun at him

"Shit...you're more ugly in person"The young man said

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!"Jeffery roared as he charged and Stabbed his knife into the young man's leg

"AHHHHH!"The young man screamed in agony and dropped his gun

"I AM BEAUTIFUL!"Jeffery Twisted the knife and made the young man fall on his back

"Guh! Son of a-AHHHHHH!"Jeffery pulled the knife out of the young man's leg

"Hehehehahaha!"Jeffery laughed as he grabbed the young man's neck with his other hand and his knife in his mouth

"Now,Hehehehe,N-Now I'm going t-to make you Hehehehahaha! B-Beautiful,Now...GO.T-Guh"The young man punched him in the face making him let go

"Kuh,if you're going to kill me just fucking kill me"The young man tried to stand but staggers because of his leg

"Hahahahahaha! I'm gonna have fun with you!"Jeffery charged at the young man with his knife ready

The young man just barley gets out of the way and was able to trip Jeffery with his good leg,Jeffery got up his smile somehow got bigger and his eyes had a look of enjoyment,Jeffery charged at the young man swinging his knife as the young man dodged the attacks but his arm was cut

"Ugh"The young man instinctively grabbed his arm in pain

Jeffery Charged at the young man bringing his knife down but he grabbed his wrist with both hands and prevented the final blow

"Hehehehehe!"Jeffery used his other hand and pulled another knife out of his pocket and stabbed the young man in the chest

"Ugh!"The young man looked at him wide eyed then at the knife in his chest

Jeffery brought his other knife back and stabbed him in the chest again pushing both his knives into his chest

"Ngh!..."The young man head butts Jeffery hard

"Ugh!"*Jeffery staggers back a bit but keeps his knives in the young man's chest

The young man head butted him again,Jeffery was seeing stars but tried to drive the knives deeper into the young man's chest 

"Get!"The young man Headbutts him hard

"The fuck!"Headbutts him again

"OFF ME!"Headbutts him hard and makes him staggers back and pulls both of his knives off the young man's chest,the young man ignored the pain and punched him in the face making him stagger more until his back hit a door,the young man grabbed Jeffery by his hoodie and punched him multiple times before punching him hard enough to break the door and sending them flying into the room

The young man uses his hands to try to push himself up but as soon as he looked up Jeffery charged at him and kicked him in the face making him fall on his back,Jeffery sat on top of the young man and punched him repeatedly laughing every time he hit him

"Hehehehahahahaha! SO FUN! COME ON! IS THIS ALL YOU GOT!? HAHAHAHAHAAHA!"Jeffery laughed like a maniac while punching the young man harder

The young man tried get up but the pain from his leg,chest,and face were getting to him,the young man felt around the floor next to him and felt something sharp...a knife,The young man grabbed the knife  and stabbed Jeffery's side 

"AHHHHHHHHHHHH!"Jeffery screamed

The young man took this chance and forced Jeffery of him and punched him in the face harder then pulls the knife out of Jeffery's side and brought it down but Jeffery stopped him by grabbing both his wrists


The young man pushed the knife down almost reaching Jeffery's chest

Jeffery screamed as the knife penetrated his chest but tried use all his strength to pull the knife out and push the young man away

"Go to sleep asshole!"The young man using his strength to push the knife deeper into Jeffery's chest

Something snapped in Jeffery's head

'go to sleep?...Go to sleep?...g-go.t-to.sl-sleep?...Go to sleep...GO TO SLEEP!'Jeffery's eyes widened"AHHHHHHHHHHHH"Jeffery kicked the young man off him 

"Shit"The young man landed on his feet and Jeffery charged at him again swinging his knife like berserker 

"die Die DIIIIIIIIIIIIIE!"Jeffery Screamed in rage swinging his knife with all his might

The young man dodged and blocks his attacks with his knife,Jeffery and the young man's knives collided and they try to push each other back with everything they have

"Ngh!"The young man was being pushed back and used what little strength he had to push Jeffery back 


"DIE DIE DIE!"Jeffery pushed the young man more,his eyes filled with blood lust

Jeffery kicked the young man's bad leg which made him struggle to stay up but after a few more kicks the young man flinched giving Jeffery the chance to push him on his back,Jeffery lunged at the young man bringing his knife down but the young man rolled out of the way making Jeffery stab the floor hard getting his knife stuck,the young man kicked Jeffery in the face hard making him stagger back and with all his strength the young man,ignoring the pain,stood up and tackled him to the floor

*Creeeeeak BANG BANG BANG*

The floor broke from under them making them fall from the second floor to the basement

"Mmm"What seemed like hours the young man woke up to see that he's surrounded by darkness,he hears the rain roar outside,he was in excruciating pain when he tried to push himself up

"Fuck"The young man looked around as best he can and saw something in the distance...his flashlight,it was blinking on and off on the floor

"Kuh"The young man with what little he had left crawled to the flashlight,as he got closer he saw eyes staring at him...they were unblinking

"Shit"The young man glared at the eyes staring back at him,he could almost see the smile getting wider and wider,the young man continue to glare at the eyes then saw what was in front of the blinking flashlight...his gun

The young man's eyes widened as he crawled to the gun still feeling the pain from the fall,Jeffery seeing what he was drawing to fall owed suit,these two no matter how much pain they were in crawled and clawed their way to the gun,the closer they got the flashlight blinked slower and as it turned off the two got closer to the gun glaring at each other as they were inches away from it

"Guh!"The young man flinched in pain as he stopped,his vision getting blurry"Fuck"The young man's vision cleared as he saw a gun barrel pointed at him

"Hehehahahahaha! N-Not my s-style but what the hell!? Hehehe! Now where were we?"Jeffery pressed the gun to the young man's forehead"Oh hehehe! I remember...Go.To.Sleep"Jeffery pulled the trigger

The flashlight died

...

The wind blew a gentle breeze as the leaves danced in the wind,a person in a hoodie,which concealed their face,walked through the gates of a cemetery,in this persons hands was a bouquet of black roses,the person walks up a hill and stops in front of a grave

"They said I'd find you here"The person said with a feminine voice laying the black roses in front of the tombstone

...

"I gotta admit...I underestimated you"The girl laughed

"Underestimating me will be the death of you"A voice said

The girl peeked behind the tombstone to see the young man sitting against the tombstone

"Heh"The girl smirked"Well,seeing as you're still alive I guess that's true"

"Hmpf"The young man stood up and looked at the girl"Not everything is as easy as it seems...especially with psychopaths like him running around"The young man said with a sigh

"Well,we live in a world where people like us exist,so anything is possible"The girl smirked"So...is it done?"The girl asked with a hint of anticipation 

The young man was quiet"Fallow me"The young man patted the the tombstone one more time before walking down the hill

"Heh"The girl looked at the young man then at the tombstone"A killer with a heart"The girl fallowed the young man leaving behind the tombstone with the name...Sally Williams

The two walked in silence towards an alley and walked into it

"This far?"The girl asked

"I'm not parking anywhere near there"The young man said with a hint of anger

The girl laughed a bit as they walked to the young man's car

"Here"The young man said with no emotion

The girl looked around the car and saw nothing,the young man lead her to the trunk and opened it...showing a man with a white face,long black hair,big eyes with no eyelids,and a gag that covers his cut open mouth

"MMMM! MMMMMM!"Jeffery struggles with the chains that are tied on his wrists and feet 

"Aw~All wrapped up and pretty like a present"The girl looked at Jeffery

"Hi Jeffy,remember me~?"The girl smiled as if she's a little girl who got a new toy

"MMMMMM! MMMMMMM!"Jeffery Glared at the girl showing more rage than before

"Hehe,but still to actually catch him and bring him alive...I'm impressed"The girl said 

The young man gives an annoyed sigh

"It wasn't easy"The young man said 

*Flashback*

"Go.to.sleep"Jeffery pulled the trigger

*Click*

"Huh?"Jeffery pulled the trigger again

*Click click click...click*

"The fuck!?"Jeffery pulled the trigger again and again but nothing happened

"Heh"The young man smirked

"Guh!"Jeffery glared at the gun and at the young man then tried to hit him with the butt of the gun 

The young man rolled away and kicked him in the face

"AHHHHH! AHHHHHHHH!"Jeffery grabbed his face in pain

The young man slowly got up and kicked him in the stomach only to feel padding"Huh?"The young man saw tearings in Jeffery's hoodie"Bulletproof armor...so that's how you're still alive"The young man kicked him in the side of his head making him roll on his back,Jeffery eyes were blurry then focused when the young man grabbed him by his hoodie and slammed him against a wall,the young man punched Jeffery in the face,then slammed his head into the wall making a hole

"Gah!"Jeffery's eyes twitched as he was brought back from the hole in the wall and punched in the face again

"You piece!"The young man punched him in the face

"Of fucking!"The young man punched him again even harder breaking some of his teeth

"SHIT!"The young man grabbed him by his hoodie and head butted him hard making his back hit the wall

"STAY DOWN!"The young man punched Jeffery through the wall making him fall on his back

"Ngh!"Jeffery was in pain,his face hurt a lot...almost like the day his face was burned making him look the way he does now,not as much but this was a close second,though being impaled by a tree branch hurt like hell too

Jeffery felt water on his face

"Huh?"Jeffery's eyes focused and saw that he was outside...it was raining

The young man walked into his line of vision and stared at the boy who used to be Jeffery Woods

"Heh...hehehehehahahahahahahaha!"Jeffery roared with laughter as the young man just stared at him

"Hehe...Ahh~that was fun"Jeffery looked at the young man his vision fading a bit"Who...who are you?"Jeffery asked as his smile grew wider

The young man didn't answer

"Hehe,strong silent type,Huh? Hehehehe,you..."Jeffery's vision was getting dark"You Sh-Should...Smile more Hehehehahahahaha!....."Jeffery laughed then passed out

The young man just stared at Jeffery or as he's known now as Jeff The Killer then dragged him to his car and put him in the trunk

*Flashback end*

"Anyway,my job is done"The young man said

"Yes it is and you brought him back alive,good job"The girl pulled an envelope out of her pocket and gave it to the young man"As promised $10,000...with a bonus

"Bonus?"The young man asked counting the money 

The girl kissed the young man on the cheek,the young man touched his cheek and looked at her surprised

"THAT kind of bonus"The girl smiled cheekily then closed the trunk and walked to the drivers seat"By the way...what's your name?"The girl said while opening the car door

"...Shawn..."The young man now known as Shawn said

"Shawn...hehe,that's a nice name"The girl smiled

"...You?..."Shawn asked

"Me?..."The girl turned her head and just barley he could see her black eyes"I'm Jane...look after yourself Shawn"The girl known as Jane drove away leaving Shawn by himself

"Hmpf"Shawn smiled a bit and walked out of the ally and went on his way

As Jane drove she couldn't help but think about what just transpired 

'Shawn,Huh?...Maybe the legends are true"Jane smiled'I wonder how "HE" will react...hehe,please keep this interesting...Shawn the immortal'Jane thought smiling more

*Mansion*

Three figures can be seen inside the mansion looking at the damage

"What a mess"

"Jeff did always make a mess but to actually lose..."

"Huh,so Jeff was beaten?"

"Yes...by the one named Shawn"

"I see"

"Should we deal with him?"

"Not until master gives us the okay"

"Understood"

"I-I say we deal with this son of a b-bitch"

"Calm down,we need to-"

The three kneeled at the same time,the three stayed like that before one them raising their head

"Yes,m-master I will d-deal with him"He stood up and walked away...his hatchets moving form every step he takes 

Thank you for reading my story,this is for the 500 people that have visited my page,thank you for taking the time to check my page out and for reading my stories,please comment and be honest,we all get better over time and I hope to reach 1,000 pageveiws and make even better stories,again thank you all
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Shawntheimmortal94 
 
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The bruises on their skin will heal but the scars in their heart won't  

A teacher in New York was teaching her class about bullying and gave them the following exercise to perform. She had the children take out a piece of paper and told them to crumple it up, stomp on it and really mess it up, not to rip it. Then she had them unfold the paper, smooth it out and look at how scarred and dirty it was. She then told them to tell it they're sorry. Now, even though they said they were sorry and tried to fix the paper, she pointed out all the scars they left behind. And that those scars will never go away no matter how hard they tried to fix it. That is what happens when a child bullies another child, they may say they're sorry, but the scars are there forever. The looks on the faces of the children in the classroom told her the message hit home. Copy and paste this if you are against bullying.Let's see who will actually re-post this. This is a test to see who's paying attention. This is a test to see how many people list actually pay attention. Copy and re-post in your own journal. Let's see who the real people are. Re-post this if you care about this kind of situation. Don't reply... just copy and paste this in a new bulletin as "Fake Deviants"repost from:

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Dark-Nynx Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hey Shawn, making new journal, reply using the new one, something is wrong with the one we are using now.
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Shawntheimmortal94 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Okay
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demonCrona Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
(THe clumsiness is real..... I didn't get to finish)

Jack and his family adopted me before he lost his eyes and when he did I stuck with him sooo I being they way I am today
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Shawntheimmortal94 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
And he taught you how to cut people up and eat their kidneys,heh,did he try to invite you to his"army"?
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demonCrona Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
To answer both replies:
Yeah make fun of me.....

And onii-chan didn't want me turn out like that.... I decided myself
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Shawntheimmortal94 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Zalgo always finds a way to get what he wants
(By the way Hahahahahahahaha!...clumsy)
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BETHwasElectrocuted Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*Smiles and waves* Hi :)
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Shawntheimmortal94 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hey,what's up?
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BETHwasElectrocuted Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Eh...not much..feel like crud
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Shawntheimmortal94 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Want to talk about it?
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