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"Make a move and I'll kill you"
Johnny froze when he heard the voice from behind him and metal being pushed on his back,he was going home from the store and it was late at night so it was no surprise that he would get mugged
"Oh god"Johnny whispers making sure not to make any sudden movements 
"God isn't here...just me"The voice said behind him
"L-Look,j-just take whatever you want but p-please don't kill me"Johnny whimpered
He felt metal pointed at his head
"You feel that? That's a 9mm pistol pointed at your head,all I have to do is pull the trigger so don't bother running away,got it?"Said the person behind him pushing the gun to his temple 
Johnny nodded quickly,tears coming out of his eyes
"Good boy,now we're going for a ride"The person pushes Johnny to a black car still pointing his pistol at him
"L-Look just take my money an-"Johnny was cutoff by a clicking sound
"Sorry I just took the safety off my gun,what were you saying?"The person said
Johnny didn't say anything but cry
"Oh,nothing to say? Good,now it's going to be a long drive so take a nap and I'll wake you up when we're there"
Johnny was about to say something but was hit in the back of the head,Johnny was on the ground,before losing consciousness all he saw were two red orbs looking down at him
Hours later
Johnny woke up to find himself in the dark and felt he was moving
"W-Wher-"Johnny was cutoff by a sudden stop in movement and hit his back hard
"Ngh"Johnny rubbed his back but before he could wonder what's going on he heard footsteps then suddenly a bright light came forcing Johnny to cover his eyes
"Rise and shine"Said a cold voice 
Johnny looked up to see a young man,he had pale skin,white hair that covered his left eye,and red eyes,he then looked up and saw a trunk door,he was in the trunk of a car for who knows how long,was he being kidnapped? Did this young man who looked like he was in his early twenties kidnap him? but why he wasn't anybody important,he had money but wasn't rich,so many questions rushed through his head until he looked at the young mans red orbs.
Johnny  remembered those eyes and he remembers what happened 
"Y-You're-"Before Johnny could say anything the young man grabbed Johnny by his collar and forced him out of the trunk and threw him to the ground,Johnny looked up and saw where he was and he paled 
"Remember this place Johnny?"The young man said walking towards him
Johnny looked around,no,he doesn't know this place but what he does know is that no one was there,no one to cry for help it was just Johnny and the young man
The young man took out a cigarette and lit it
Johnny looked at the young man with a worried expression
The young man took a drag of his cigarette 
"You don't remember do you?"He asked 
All Johnny could do was shake his head with tears coming out of his eyes
"I thought so but she didn't forget"The young man said taking another drag of his cigarette 
Johnny was confused
"S-She?"Johnny stutters
The young man walked to Johnny and grabs him by the neck
"You don't even have the decency to remember the girl you killed? That's just rude"The young man stabbed the cigarette on Johnny's head making him scream in agony 
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!"Johnny screamed in agony feeling the burn on his head and the young man driving it into his head made it worse 
"Not so tough when you're not dealing with a little girl,Huh!?"The young man yelled kneeing him in the face
Johnny fell on his back holding his face writhing in pain
"You know,I hate people like you,you commit a crime and you walk off free and act like nothing's happened,like you can just wipe the slate clean and all will be forgiven and the people you hurt will just get over it"The young man said looking
Johnny still holding his face in pain looked at the young man
"W-Why?"Johnny said weakly
The young man looked at him
"Why?"The young man said tilting his head
The young man grabbed Johnny from the back of his head and slammed it on the concrete 
"THIS IS WHERE YOU KILLED HER,WHERE YOU MOLESTED HER AND LEFT HER TO DIE LIKE AN ANIMAL!!!!"The young man yelled full of rage while driving Johnny's head into the concrete 
"I-I didn-"Johnny was cutoff
"YES YOU DID!!!"The young man picked up Johnny's head so he could look at him in the eye
"You killed her because she told on you,she told told her parents what you did and you killed her"The young man said
"N-No I-I..."Johnny couldn't say anything,what could he say? Here he is face to face with someone who really wants to hurt him but why? Why? Johnny thought what has he done to deserve this,he was a good guy not perfect but still a good guy and now he's been threatened at gun point,kidnapped,and now is getting beaten up because of Sa-
Johnny's eyes widened 
The young man saw this
"It's coming back isn't it?"The young man said letting go of Johnny's head
Johnny began to remember but something inside him didn't want him too,Johnny turned to the young man and saw something behind him,was he seeing things? No,there was something there and deep down Johnny knew what it was
"What was her name?"The young man said pulling out his pistol
Johnny was still looking behind him,eyes widening as whatever it was began to take shape,a human shape
"I-I don't-"
*BANG*
"AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!"
The young man shot Johnny's leg
"What.was.her.name?"The young man said slowly
Johnny was in more pain than he could ever imagine,he tried to crawl away but...
*BANG*
He was shot in the arm 
The young man grabbed the back of Johnny's head
"What's her name?"The young man whispered 
Johnny was in pain he couldn't believe this was happening,what did he do? What little girl? Why? Why was this happening? All because she couldn't keep her mouth shu-
Johnny's eyes widened and in the corner of his eye the blur started to become clear,it was a girl...a little girl no older then seven years old,she had brown curly hair that reached her shoulders,forest green eyes,and a pink tattered night gown with something stitched to it
*BANG*
The young man shot him in the back letting him fall on the ground and points the gun at Johnny temple 
"Say it"The young man whispers getting impatient 
Johnny couldn't hear anything he just looked at the girl and he started to remember
"Sa...lly"Johnny said
Yes,Sally was her name,the little girl he molested and killed,that was ten years ago and forgot all of it,everything that happened...everything he's done and there she was looking at him with tears of blood coming out of her eyes
*BANG*
The young man shot Johnny in the head finally ending his misery,so much blood surrounded his body and his eyes now lifeless and unblinking still staring at the innocent girl he killed because of what he's done to her and this young man came to avenge that little girl and made him suffer before he killed him and the young man got what he wanted he killed Johnny in front of Sally at the same place Johnny killed her...in the end no matter how far you run,no matter where you hide,no one can escape justice.



Story based on creepypasta Play with me by Kiki-hyuga
Thank you for taking the time to read my story and I hope you enjoyed it,tell me what you think of it and be honest









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:iconjazzminth22:
JazzminTH22 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, very well done my friend, im trully impressed!
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Shawntheimmortal94 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks,if I write another one I'll let you know
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:iconjazzminth22:
JazzminTH22 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sounds like a plan
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troyrich93 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist
Awesome^^
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Shawntheimmortal94 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Really? Thanks,I plan on making more based on creepypastas
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troyrich93 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist
Cool^^
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:iconshawntheimmortal94:
Shawntheimmortal94 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks 
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troyrich93 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist
Np
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DMC3Vergil Featured By Owner Edited Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*jaw drop* in the begining, when it said that johnny raped and mudered a little girl. i was like, 'Hmmm, i think i might know who this lil kid is." than when i was the word 'Sa', my suspisions was correct. when it described sally. My jaw dropped.

with the young man, im may be thinking it might be u.

Bravo!!:D
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:iconshawntheimmortal94:
Shawntheimmortal94 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much,sir I appreciate you reading it and yes,the young man is me*Hugs Sally*No one fucks with Sally and gets away with it!
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